Talk:Isabel Fernández/GA1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Sammi Brie in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 23:44, 20 August 2022 (UTC)
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Everything checks out. Just a few minor copy changes and a suggestion from your bilingual reviewer. 7-day hold to Krisgabwoosh. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 23:56, 20 August 2022 (UTC)
Copy changes
edit- until end add a "the"
- social communication I'm half wondering if this should read public relations instead of being a literal translation of comunicación social. Would this merit, maybe, {{tooltip}}?
- The Spanish article for comunicación social connects to communication studies. I've changed it to that. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 01:07, 21 August 2022 (UTC)
- "Associated Journalists Television (PAT)" should be an interlanguage link to es:PAT (canal de televisión)
- is "State media" supposed to have a capital S here? probably not
- I've grown accustomed to capitalizing "state" when referring to it in the institutional sense (i.e. separation of Church and State). It's a bit ambiguous here, though, so I've decapitalized it. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 01:07, 21 August 2022 (UTC)
Other items
edit- References are archived.
- Earwig shows no copyright violations.
- Images need alt text.
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