Talk:Islam and mental health
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Zksoofi in topic peer review
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editGood start to a very important topic. You have a good lattice in place for the rest of your work to fall into. What you have written so far is easy to understand and written in plain language. I would suggest splitting the description of sickness of the heart and body into new paragraphs and explaining the details of each with bullet points to make it easier to compare and contrast the two. Overall, I think it's a great start. Hope you're doing well :) Mattymkat (talk) 20:57, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
- thanks brother. appreciate your feedback. thriving in this last stretch, hope you are too :))) Zksoofi (talk) 21:41, 14 November 2022 (UTC)