Talk:Issaquah Highlands

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Kosack in topic GA Review

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I am the author of this article. It was compiled from various sources, including, a "case study" for the Urban Land Institute (ULI) which I edited prior to submission and information made available to me by home builders, the development company and the local chapter of the Building Industry Association in my capacity as a freelance writer. Every attempt was made to keep the information in lines with a neutral point of view. The subject, on my opinion, is significant as it represents a large scale mixed use master plan developed under principles of New Urbanism and Traditional Neighborhood design. CaptBainbridge (talk) 20:49, 11 May 2009 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 09:43, 11 October 2018 (UTC)Reply


I'll take this one as well. Will post review as soon as possible. Kosack (talk) 09:43, 11 October 2018 (UTC)Reply

Initial review

Lead

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  • Needs United States worked into the location for readers unfamiliar with area.
    • Fixed.

History

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  • King County could be linked in the first paragraph here.
    • Fixed.
  • "The first homes at Issaquah Highland", > Issaquah Highlands (last paragraph).
    • Fixed.

Transportation

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  • "operate bus service to Issaquah Highlands", might be an American/English difference but, this reads a little oddly to me. Should it be "operate a bus service" or services?
    • Wasn't a ENGVAR difference, just a typo on my part. Fixed.

Very little I can find to bring up really. References are well formatted and of no concern. A well written piece. Placed on hold until the points above are addressed. Kosack (talk) 11:09, 11 October 2018 (UTC)Reply

@Kosack: Thanks for this review as well. All addressed as written above. SounderBruce 17:07, 11 October 2018 (UTC)Reply
@SounderBruce: All issues addressed, I have no further concerns. A thorough and detailed article which easily meets the GA criteria. Promoting. Kosack (talk) 18:28, 11 October 2018 (UTC)Reply
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