Talk:It Don't Matter

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Cartoon network freak in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 07:09, 18 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

Hi @The Rambling Man. Apologies if I am missing something here, but ... whats the status of this review. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 10:51, 26 October 2021 (UTC)Reply

Completely dropped off my radar. I'll get to it in the next few days. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 12:07, 26 October 2021 (UTC)Reply

Comments

  • Could link disk jockey.
  • "was handled by the latter" OHYES and Alok? Might be confusing, perhaps split.
  • "done by" made by? "done" is grim.
  • "was issued before the original track's release on 6 May 2021 by Controversia" -> "was issued the day before the original track's release by Controversia"
  • "travelling over the world" around rather than over?
  • "joy[...] of touring" -> "joy ... of touring" (non-breaking space before the ellipsis.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:48, 27 October 2021 (UTC)Reply

@The Rambling Man: Thank you for your review, I have adressed your comments! Could you possibly do the last comment for me? I don't think I fully understand what you mean. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:04, 30 October 2021 (UTC)Reply