Talk:Italian cruiser Libia/GA1
Latest comment: 10 years ago by Zawed in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 01:19, 23 November 2014 (UTC)
I'll take this one. Comments as follows:
- Infobox: Inconsistency between mm/cm in the armament section
- Fixed
- Service history: needs a clear statement that was intended for Ottoman Navy, as per lead.
- Added, good catch.
- wikilink Ottoman Empire and Austro-Hungarian
- Added links
- Doesn't explictly state the RM seized the ship as per lead
- It's in the service history section where it discusses the ship's construction.
- Missing word I think? "Instead, Revel decided to implement blockade"; should that be "implement a blockade"?
- Fixed.
Checked duplicate and links; there are none. No images to review.
In summary, minor issues only; I'll check on progress in a few days. Zawed (talk) 01:19, 23 November 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks for reviewing the article, Zawed. Parsecboy (talk) 13:11, 24 November 2014 (UTC)
- Looks good, passing as GA. Zawed (talk) 07:39, 27 November 2014 (UTC)