Talk:Italian cruiser Varese

GA Review

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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 16:46, 25 February 2015 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

   Pipe the link to deck (ship) in the infobox

   Watch ENGVAR - see armor and armour

   Good catches.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

   What does Beehler say about the attack on Beirut? Might be worth checking Langensiepen & Guleryuz as well.

   L&G is what I followed for the article; I think that I'll rework this to put the whole incident into the footnote as Beehler also says that Garibaldi and Ferrucio bombarded Beirut.

   Whoops, that's what I get for trying to review an article at work. Looks fine to me now.

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Thanks for looking this over.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:19, 25 February 2015 (UTC)