Talk:Italian ironclad Re di Portogallo
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Zawed in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 08:01, 11 February 2016 (UTC)
I will review, comments to follow. Zawed (talk) 08:01, 11 February 2016 (UTC)
Only a few issues that need attention, there were a couple of typos that I fixed myself:
- infobox; there is a difference in the displacements recited here and in the text. Also a difference in the number of boilers, plus a very small difference in draft.
- Fixed displacement and boilers, but draft is the same.
- first paragraph of the service history; it is very jarring how it moves from the completion of the ship to the declaration of war. Suggest splitting the paragraph into two at this point.
- I'm not really a fan of short paragraphs - see if what I added makes it a smoother transition.
- link Adriatic?
- Done
- final sentence - there seems to be an issue with the Italia-class wikilink - an extra s - should that also include ironclad?
- Nope, there should have been an "e" there.
- references: missing Silverstone (see note 2)
- Added, good catch. Parsecboy (talk) 20:01, 15 February 2016 (UTC)
Overall, this article reads well, is fully cited and neutral in tone, and has reasonable coverage of the subject. The tags on the images appear appropriate. That's it for me, I will check back in a few days. Cheers. Zawed (talk) 08:24, 11 February 2016 (UTC)
- Good work, passing as GA. Zawed (talk) 08:47, 16 February 2016 (UTC)