Talk:Italian ironclad Sicilia/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:41, 15 September 2015 (UTC)

• I'll get to this in the fullness of time.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:41, 15 September 2015 (UTC)

• No DABs, external links OK.
• Images appropriately licensed.
• At that time, it was the Royal Italian Navy and put the Italian name for it in parens and italics.
  • Fixed
• She was armed with a main battery of four 13.5-inch (340 mm) guns, had a top speed of 20.3 knots use an "and" instead of the comma
  • Fixed
• Add a link for naval gunfire support to the mention of bombarding in the lede.
  • Done
• Sicilia was 127.6 meters (419 ft) long overall and had a beam of 23.44 m (76.9 ft) and an average draft of 8.83 m (29.0 ft).
  • Fixed
• Explain what /30 means.
  • Done
• Watch your roundings for your conversions in the text.
  • Should be good now
• Link launched
  • Done
• three Ruggiero di Laurias and Enrico Dandolo what kind of ships are these?
  • Clarified
• Your bête-noir in the refs.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:57, 3 October 2015 (UTC)
  • Fixed, thanks Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 12:26, 8 October 2015 (UTC)