Talk:Jackson Rancheria Casino Resort

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Stesmo in topic Promotional Tone and More Sources

Promotional Tone and More Sources

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The article currently is written more like an advertisement than an encyclopedia article. A few examples of promotional language and puffery: "Enjoy a shareable appetizer, two entrées, a shareable dessert and a wine pairing for two!", "mouth watering", "spacious seating, delicious food and a delectable Bakery", etc. Additionally, this article needs more reliable, independent, third-party sources.Stesmo (talk) 23:54, 7 August 2014 (UTC)Reply