Talk:Jacques Lewis

Latest comment: 5 days ago by Thriley in topic Did you know nomination

Did you know nomination

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  • Source: "Believed to be the last surviving Frenchman to wade ashore with Americans, he was attached to an Army unit that stormed Utah Beach and helped drive Germans out of France."
NY Times
Created by Thriley (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 139 past nominations.

Thriley (talk) 16:32, 18 August 2024 (UTC). ReviewReply

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited:   - The NYT source does not support the hook as written because it only covers the US landings but there were British and Canadian beaches on D-Day too. A claim of first/last is a   Redflag and so needs excellent verification.
  • Interesting:  
  • Other problems:   - "Believed" is a weasel word and/or expression of doubt. If this is a definite fact, as it should be, then we should state it as such without such tentative language.

QPQ:   - Not provided yet. Note current discussions about limiting nominations on credit like this.
Overall:   I'm not sure of the formal status of translations but this review template asks Is the article free of material copied from other sources? and it isn't. The article seemed to need some copy-editing and so further work of that kind may soften the issue. Andrew🐉(talk) 10:04, 20 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for your review. Will fix up shortly. Thriley (talk) 21:47, 25 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

ALT1... that Jacques Lewis, a 105 year old French veteran of D-Day, insisted that he participate in a ceremony commemorating the invasion's 80th anniversary? Thriley (talk) 20:55, 6 September 2024 (UTC)Reply