Talk:Jagdgeschwader II/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 08:18, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 08:18, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y (0.0%) 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No Dead links Y

Prose Suggestions

• When the war ended on 11 November 1918, the wing's personnel began to straggle home. suggest When the war ended on 11 November 1918, the wing's personnel began to return home.
  • Rewritten.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:19, 9 March 2018 (UTC)

Operational history

• Jagdgeschwader II (Fighter Wing II, or JG II) came into being because suggest Jagdgeschwader II (Fighter Wing II, or JG II) was created because
• but were beginning to receive Fokker Dr.1 triplanes on 16 February. suggest either but were beginning to receive Fokker Dr.1 triplanes by 16 February. or else but began to receive Fokker Dr.1 triplanes on 16 February.
  • Done.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:19, 9 March 2018 (UTC)
• @Georgejdorner: That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:07, 9 March 2018 (UTC)