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Requested move
edit- The following discussion is an archived discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review. No further edits should be made to this section.
The result of the move request was: page moved. Wbm1058 (talk) 15:02, 20 July 2014 (UTC)
 | The request to rename this article to Jake Barton has been carried out. |
Jake Barton- Local Projects → Jake Barton – do not want to include name of company with name of person. Dcarofano24 (talk) 16:12, 18 July 2014 (UTC)
- Comment the article doesn't seem to be about the person, rather it seems to be about the organization. -- 65.94.171.126 (talk) 04:57, 19 July 2014 (UTC)
- Done: for now I've moved the stub to the title Jake Barton because the previous title was malformed (and a bot had given it a DEFAULTSORT of "Project, ..."), and because the article creator has requested this. I agree that it seems to be more about the company, and perhaps the material should be in an article about the company - I've created a redirect from Local Projects to this article, and linked the company name where it appears in National September 11 Memorial & Museum. PamD 14:54, 20 July 2014 (UTC)
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on this talk page or in a move review. No further edits should be made to this section.
Cleanup needed
editAlmost all the information in the text of this article is about "Local Projects", not "Jake Barton", WP:NOTABILITY is not inherited, and the statements of notability are about the organization, not the person, so WP:COATRACK. This article is not carrying WP:REFERENCES, but carries a large number of external links separated into sections, seemingly a WP:LINKFARM. -- 65.94.171.126 (talk) 04:57, 19 July 2014 (UTC)
- Yes, I agree - and although I think the man may well be "notable", we need explicit sources to support this and to show where the date of birth, education, etc have been found. @Dcarofano24: please provide proper sources. I'll remove the section of ELs which is all about the 9/11 museum - if appropriate at all they should be in that article, now linked from this. Thanks. PamD 15:07, 20 July 2014 (UTC)
Understand. This is my first time building an article, getting used to the format. Working on cleanup and reformatting this page. Thank you. @PamD