Talk:James Clark (Jesuit)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: An anonymous username, not my real name (talk · contribs) 04:09, 27 February 2022 (UTC)

This is a nicely written article and I would be happy to review it. It may take some time, as I am a fairly busy person, but I will try not to be too long. --An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 04:09, 27 February 2022 (UTC)

There are few parts it might help to elaborate on, but it looks pretty good. I've made a list of what stands out.

• Both of his parents were Protestant. What branch(es)?
  • I cannot find a source that specifies. Ergo Sum 18:24, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
• ...and ranked 34th in his class. How large was his class?
  • Added class size. Ergo Sum 18:32, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
• Did he ever explain his decision to convert to Catholicism?
  • I am not able to find a source that elaborates on his conversion. Ergo Sum 18:32, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
• Clark returned to Georgetown University, where he again became the vice president and treasurer of the university, as well as a professor mathematics. How did he get from here to Gonzaga College?
  • If you are referring to his mode of transportation, I'm not sure that's really encyclopedic or terribly important. In any event, the sources here do not mention it. Ergo Sum 18:33, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
    • I was referring to his decision to leave Georgetown University at all. --An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 18:49, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
      • Unfortunately, the sources don't seem to elaborate on this either. Ergo Sum 01:59, 28 February 2022 (UTC)
• A Views section and Legacy section would be helpful.
  • I've included everything I can find about his life. There's not really any more that can be said in such a section. Ergo Sum 18:33, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
• Are there any other relevant images besides the main one?
  • There are none that I've found that have the proper copyright license to be uploaded. Ergo Sum 18:34, 27 February 2022 (UTC)

I think that's all it will need. --An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 15:13, 27 February 2022 (UTC)

Thank you for your review, An anonymous username, not my real name. Ergo Sum 18:34, 27 February 2022 (UTC)

You are very welcome. --An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 18:49, 27 February 2022 (UTC)

Ergo Sum, I will pass this as soon as you take a look at the part of my review that had you confused. Now that I've explained what I meant, after you address it, if you can, I will pass the article. --An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 23:20, 27 February 2022 (UTC)

Final note: I am now done reviewing the article and have passed it. Excellent work! --An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 21:38, 28 February 2022 (UTC)

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