Talk:Jamie Arthur/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 07:47, 19 May 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Interestingly we have an article on Professional boxing which could be linked. -Done
• although the lightweight category lacks its own article, we do have Boxing at the 2002 Commonwealth Games as a more specific link than just the games themselves.-Done
• "to him retiring in " -> "to his retirement in".-Done
• Could link some of these weight categories...-Done
• "first fence against" de-fence?-Done
• "stoppage defeat" what is that, a TKO? Link at least.

  Yes, added the link. Kosack (talk) 10:52, 26 May 2021 (UTC)

• Stance is mentioned in the infobox but nowhere else and not referenced.-Done
• "After six weeks, his coach convinced him to take up the sport full-time" at the age of nine?? -Reworded
• Nothing really between him being nine (~1988) and the Commonwealths (2002)?

  I've only found one or two mentions of youth tiles but the source doesn't seem particularly reliable. He appears to have been a late bloomer. Kosack (talk) 10:52, 26 May 2021 (UTC)

• "focus on his boxing career..." but he became a scaffolder? Is scaffold a universal word, perhaps needs link? -Reworded
• Could link the Wales squad bit to Wales at the 2002 Commonwealth Games.-Done
• "in his semi-final bout" no need for bout.-Done
• "incase" two words.-Done
• Referee (boxing) has an article.-Done
• ""professional debut in March"" do we know what weight class?-Done
• Boxing training has a link.-Done
• "18-months" no hyphen.-Done
• Could link winning streak-Done
• "despite separating from trainer" any clues why?

  No explanation unfortunately, probably kept behind closed doors. Kosack (talk) 10:52, 26 May 2021 (UTC)

• "the Prizefighter series at" any more info on this?-Done
• "opening his own gym " what happened to his first gym?

  I can't seem to find any further info on the gym, but I'd assume it was discontinued if he went on to setup a second one. Kosack (talk) 18:00, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

• what happened after Horvatic?

  Expanded slightly, he's been pretty quiet since giving up fighting. Kosack (talk) 18:00, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

• "Prizefighter quarter-final" text in table looks larger. I don't see why you need the smaller font really, the table only occupies 2/3 of my width.

That's all I have, so it's on hold for now. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 09:40, 26 May 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Thanks for the review, I've responded as best as I can on all points. Let me know what you think. Kosack (talk) 18:00, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

Good to go. Nice work. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 21:14, 29 May 2021 (UTC)