A fact from Janet Smith case appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 28 April 2011 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
Did you know... that the Janet Smith case, the unsolved 1924 murder of a Scottish nursemaid in Vancouver, led to an attempt to make it illegal to employ Orientals and white women in the same household?
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"The Chinese houseboy, married (arrived in Canada in 1913 leaving family in Hong Kong) 25-[2][3] or 27-year-old[1] Wong Foon Sing"
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Also in the household was Wong Foon Sing, a Chinese houseboy who had arrived in Canada in 1913, leaving his wife in Hong Kong. Wong, variously reported as 25 or 28, became infatuated...
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