Talk:Japanese aircraft carrier Katsuragi/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Nick-D (talk · contribs) 00:28, 3 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

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  • I'm not sure about the accuracy of saying that she "did not participate in any battles" - she was one of the main targets of two major US Navy raids on Kure
  • What's meant by "the ultimate expression of Japanese carrier construction"? While these were the final Japanese CV design to go into production, they were basically a variant of an old design, and weren't as sophisticated as the Taihō or the Shōkaku classes. I'd suggest changing this to 'the final class of Japanese aircraft carriers to be built" or similar.
  • "Cultural References" sections are generally frowned upon these days, and the current content is uncited.
    • Deleted.
  • Not all of the works in the references section have actually been used - while this isn't a big deal, I'd suggest creating a 'further reading' section for these works.
    • Done.
  • I've linked the two raids on Kure (the March 1945 one is on my to-do list)
    • Thanks.

Assessment against GA criteria

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

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    Great work with this article Nick-D (talk) 00:22, 4 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review, and don't forget to look over Arizona's FAC.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:24, 3 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

I've shifted to support there :) Nick-D (talk) 00:22, 4 December 2011 (UTC)Reply