Talk:Japanese cruiser Naniwa/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Hog Farm in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 03:51, 17 June 2021 (UTC)
- Link to Takachiho in the design section
- Infobox gives crew of 325, body says 338
- Infobox says completed in December 1885, prose says February 1886
- Is what the ship did in 1891 known, or at least where it was primarily stationed?
- "Jiyuan may have tried to pass to closely to Naniwa" - Should it be "too closely" (I'm bad with homophones)
- Recommend splitting the Battle of the Yalu River section, as a good portion of it isn't about that battle.
- Link the Boxer Rebellion
- It looks like the page link for Duus needs tweaking, as it's showing up as pg. 1 in the results when it's really linking to pg. 82 on IA
- Deleted the link to the specific page
- Some sort of error in ref 48
- Nothing's showing up on my computer
- sources look reliable, and image licensing looks okay.
Placing on hold, good work. Hog Farm Talk 02:33, 18 June 2021 (UTC)
- See if my changes are satisfactory. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:07, 18 June 2021 (UTC)
- I've fixed the ref error (apparently it was missing the pp=). Passing now. Hog Farm Talk 05:01, 19 June 2021 (UTC)