Talk:Japanese destroyer Enoki (1945)/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Peacemaker67 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 05:27, 17 July 2020 (UTC)
Pretty brief one this. A few comments:
- suggest adding |infobox caption=Enoki to Infobox ship begin to put the ship name at the top of the infobox
- I hate that actually. Seems entirely redundant to the article title and the name in the ship career infobox
- escort destroyers is a dab page
- True, but it contains the essence of the meaning at the head of the page.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:36, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
- Really doesn't meet any of the exceptions at WP:FURTHERDAB. As part of my tweak of the lead I have linked escort destroyer to Destroyer#Later combat. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 07:05, 31 July 2020 (UTC)
- True, but it contains the essence of the meaning at the head of the page.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:36, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
- in the lead it is "Tachibana-class" and in the body "Tachibana sub-class" perhaps add a sentence to the lead and tweak the infobox
- Done, but I'm not altogether happy with the wording, so feel free to make changes.
- use "escort destroyer" early in the Design and description section
- move the sentence beginning "The accuracy of the Type 89 guns..." to immediately after "gun shield"
- Does seem rather pointless.
- The point is that it keeps all of the info about the main battery together. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 07:05, 31 July 2020 (UTC)
- Does seem rather pointless.
- should it have the coord template at the top, as it isn't there anymore?
- Good catch.
Not much to nitpick about. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 05:41, 17 July 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks for catching all these nits.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:37, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
- This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an acceptably licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 07:05, 31 July 2020 (UTC)