Talk:Jean Ambroise Baston de Lariboisière
Latest comment: 14 years ago by Magicpiano in topic GA Review
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GA Review
edit- This review is transcluded from Talk:Jean Ambroise Baston de Lariboisière/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Magic♪piano 20:48, 14 June 2010 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- The writing is basically decent but not spectacular, and there are a few issues I outline below.
- B. MoS compliance:
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- Coverage is a bit thin, but adequate. It would be nice to have quotes from his peers, superiors, or Napoleon concerning his performance, if these are available.
- I didn't find any, but if I do eventually, I'll add them. I added a bit more on his activities in Italy. The artillery guys are under covered; they tend not to do exciting charges and what not (like Murat), and some are colorful (like Bonaparte), but for the most part, not much.
- Coverage is a bit thin, but adequate. It would be nice to have quotes from his peers, superiors, or Napoleon concerning his performance, if these are available.
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- His portrait caption could credit the painter...
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail: Issues addressed.
- Pass or Fail:
Prose issues
edit- consistency of spelling in place names (Vilnius vs. Vilna, Koenigsberg vs. Königsberg)
- more things should be linked: East Prussia, Moscow, and Grand Army, to name just those in the lead
- The names of several of his commanding officers are piped to last name; this is not useful for people unfamiliar with Napoleonic-era history. A brief indicator of who these people are and their relative importance would be appreciated.
These things should be pretty easy to take care of; I'll place the nomination on hold. Magic♪piano 02:16, 15 June 2010 (UTC)
- These should be addressed now. auntieruth (talk) 20:16, 16 June 2010 (UTC)
- Looks good; article passes. Congratulations! Magic♪piano 12:54, 17 June 2010 (UTC)