Talk:Jean Bart-class cruiser/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 04:15, 23 August 2020 (UTC)

This is in great shape as expected. A few comments:

Lead and infobox

• suggest "The Alger class comprised three protected cruisers of the French Navy built in the late 1880s and early 1890s; the three ships were Alger, Isly, and Jean Bart."
  • Good idea
• suggest "and were followed by Jean Bart in 1898"
  • Works for me
• link Far East, it is a bit archaic these days
  • Done
• comma after Arsenal De Rochefort in the infobox, perhaps this would be better as a list with each on a new line?
  • I had overlooked that when I expanded the article - fixed
• suggest lost 1, retired 2 in the infobox
  • Fixed

Body

• "French cruiser Châteaurenault→Châteaurenault"
  • Fixed
• the displacement in the body doesn't match the infobox
  • Fixed
• what 100 mm guns?
  • Fixed, good catch
• which guns were the gunshields for?
  • Clarified
• link Far East
  • Done
• add OCLC for Scientific American Supplement
  • Done

That's all I could find. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 11:09, 23 August 2020 (UTC)

Thanks PM. Parsecboy (talk) 15:18, 24 August 2020 (UTC)

No worries, always a pleasure. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by acceptably licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 00:56, 25 August 2020 (UTC)