Talk:Jeff Hendrick/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: REDMAN 2019 (talk · contribs) 10:47, 3 September 2020 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this one soon. REDMAN 2019 (talk) 10:47, 3 September 2020 (UTC)

General

There is only one sentence covering the 2014-15 season. Could some more information be added?

 Done

2011–2012: Breakthrough to first-team action and Young Player of the Year Award

• Burnley only need to be linked one.
• "He started every match for the remainder of the season after this fixture, displacing James Bailey in central midfield." This needs a reference.

 Done I re-worded the James Bailey sentence and provided a ref.

2013–2014: Player of the Season runner-up and play-off final agony

• "Hendrick finished the season as runner-up for the Derby County Player of the Season Award". Could a source be found for that?
• Bristol City and Craig Bryson are both linked above.

 Done

Newcastle United

• "After leaving Burnley and having been linked to Italian clubs Milan and Roma". A ref would be good here.

 Done I moved the RTE Sport source which includes the info to the end of that claim.

References

• Refs 22, 46, and 47, are permanent dead links, new sources will need to be found.
• Most of the Derby Telegraph sources are unable to be viewed. Could alternative sources be found?
• Ref 95 is no longer available to be viewed at the BBC Sport website.

I replaced the dead links with new sources. However, I am able to view the rest of the Derby Telegraph sources fine in the web.archive.org website and I am also able to view that BBC Sport source you mentioned. Perhaps you could clarify with me.

Not sure what happened with the BBC link. I still cannot access the Derby Telegraph sources but maybe that's just me. I'm a bit short on time at the moment, but I will give the article a final look over tomorrow or the day after. Cheers! REDMAN 2019 (talk) 18:07, 5 September 2020 (UTC)

Comments

There is a bit of work to be done here so I'm putting this on hold. I will check on how things are going in the near future. Feel free to contact me if you have any questions or ping me if you prefer. Cheers! REDMAN 2019 (talk) 13:05, 3 September 2020 (UTC)

I have seen to those changes now Redman. Can you just clarify with me about the Derby Telegraph sources and the one BBC Sport source that you have mentioned above. Many thanks. Inexorable Existence (talk) 04:03, 5 September 2020 (UTC)

I have had a look over the article and believe that it now meets GA criteria, so I am passing it. REDMAN 2019 (talk) 12:33, 6 September 2020 (UTC)