Talk:Jerry's Painting/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Queenieacoustic in topic GA Review

GA Review

edit
GA toolbox
Reviewing

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Queenieacoustic (talk) 21:05, 5 May 2011 (UTC)Reply

Will review this tomorrow. Queenieacoustic (talk) 21:05, 5 May 2011 (UTC)Reply

Comments

edit

Plot

edit

Production

edit
  • "Jerry's Painting" was written by Norm Hiscock and directed by Dean Holland. During its original broadcast, "Jerry's Painting" ran for... Start the second sentence with "the episode" instead.
  • "Jerry's Painting" featured a guest appearance by Darlene Hunt as Marcia Langman, a member of the conservative group, the Society for Family Stability Foundation. Drop the second comma.
  • Remember to write (pictured) after the name of the person in the picture.

Cultural references

edit
  • ...Andy and April instead start to purchase several "as seen on TV", including... Looks like a noun is missing after "as seen on TV", unless that is the noun?

Reception

edit

Lead

edit

With not much at all to complain about, this is overall a very well-written article. Just fix said issues and we've got ourselves another GA. I'll put it on hold for seven days so that the changes can be made. Queenieacoustic (talk) 09:08, 6 May 2011 (UTC)Reply