Talk:Jimmie Guthrie
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Rocknrollmancer in topic Unbalanced and Overly detailed
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Unbalanced and Overly detailed
editI have re-arranged the order of sections to reflect this is a biography of a Grand Prix rider, not a promotion piece for the Isle of Man
I have added banner and section tags as too much emphasis has been placed on headed sections for Isle of Man exploits in too much detail, whereas relatively little has been written about Guthrie's Grand Prix career
I have also removed 12 instances of the phrase "Isle of Man" from the various prose sections. The majority of references are also Isle of Man orientated
The article lede states "famous for 19 motorcycle Grand Prix wins" but no detail elsewhere or table of results. This article needs expansion of the general aspects and Grand Prix career.--Rocknrollmancer (talk) 22:24, 30 March 2017 (UTC)