Talk:Jocky Wilson Cup/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 00:34, 6 September 2020 (UTC)
- "There were five matches in the cup: four 501 singles matches and one 1001 doubles game - Is there a way to briefly gloss what this means? I'm American, and I've never heard of much professional darts matches on this side of the pond. One of the tricky parts of sport articles is trying to keep the jargon down. I've found with baseball articles you can't really assume much background knowledge. I'm assuming 501 and 1001 are points totals, but if there's a way to gloss/link this to make it clearer, that would be nice.
- "Wade said his match against Anderson has the potential to establish the overall mood" - Weird use of the present tense here, since this happened about 9 years ago.
Not much to pick on here at all. Good work on this one. Hog Farm Bacon 19:02, 6 September 2020 (UTC)
- @Hog Farm: Have made changes based upon both points above. MWright96 (talk) 19:43, 6 September 2020 (UTC)