Talk:Joe Johnson (snooker player)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MaxnaCarta (talk · contribs) 05:46, 22 August 2023 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

General comments

Lead

• Added "The British"
• Removed hyphen from "quarterfinals"
• Linked English to England

Early life

• two commas added
• Johnson was National to Johnson was the National
• and three times Yorkshire Champion changed to and a three-time Yorkshire Champion

Early years

• Capitalised championship
• Hyphen to 100-break added
• Removed comma
• Hyphen to "last-16" added

1982

• Fixed spelling of opening
• Johnson recorded 10–0 whitewash changed to Johnson recorded a 10–0 whitewash

Thanks for those, MaxnaCarta. MOS:SNOOKER (yes, there is one!) says that there should be a hyphen in quarter-finals, so am I OK to amend those? BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:12, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

I'll put the hyphens back, sorry for that! — MaxnaCarta  ( 💬 • 📝 ) 02:36, 31 August 2023 (UTC)

I've done another copyedit, replacing those hyphens and adding some commas. Advantage was also misspelled so I fixed that. Other than those, this now meets the core criteria for GA and so I will pass. — MaxnaCarta  ( 💬 • 📝 ) 02:41, 31 August 2023 (UTC)

Spot Checks

• [20] - I mean, not quite. It does not confirm he was inside the 1983 masters; rather, the reference confirms he was not within the eight-player group. However, this is not a controversial fact. The linked article confirms he was within the 1983 masters, so this is fine.

• I've added a source (and tweaked the text from "eight" to "six"). I've also wikilinked sources where I could, and added a few extra clipppings. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:13, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

• [32a] - Y
• [32b] - Y
• [23] - Y
• [42c] - Y (Impressive, the article used the exact adjective of "attacking", I love this source-text integrity
• [48a] - Y
• [52b] - Y
• [86] - Y
• [87] - Y

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.