Talk:Joel Eriksson Ek

GA Review

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 14:32, 26 January 2024 (UTC)

Hello! My name is GhostRiver, and I'll be conducting this GA review. I will assess the article against the good article criteria. Once I complete my review, you will have seven days to implement the suggested edits.

GhostRiver, I believe I have addressed all of your concerns to date. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 16:11, 11 February 2024 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lede

• Would bulk this up a bit with a couple key moments or stats from after he was drafted

Personal life

• Can cut the word "parents" in the first sentence, the "to" already implies parentage  Done
• hockey playing family as his → hockey playing family: his  Done
• was drafted by → was selected by or was taken by to limit repetition of "draft"  Done
• because of his dedication to the sport and his playing skills → due to his playing skills as well as his dedication to the sport  Done

Playing career

Sweden

• "for the Färjestad BK" wherever it appears  Done
• Link 2014–15 to 2014–15 SHL season  Done
• Link first instance of Goal (ice hockey) and Point (ice hockey)  Done
• Remove hyphen in "three-years"  Done
• season and eventually raised his draft ranking from 22nd to fourth among all international skaters → season, entering the draft as the fourth-highest rated international skater  Done
• It was suggested by numerous hockey analysts → Several hockey analysts theorized  Done

Minnesota Wild

• Comma after ahead of the 2016–17 season  Done
• Specify which game made him the first Wild teenager to have a three-assist game  Done
  • The source only says the game was against the Bruins so I added this reference from NHL.com as well to show it was on October 26 and he got three points
• "General manager" isn't capitalized  Done
• in order to not burn the first year of his contract split infinitive + informal language. Suggest combining this with sentence before it to make something like After two games as a healthy scratch, Eriksson Ek was returned to Färjestad BK on 17 November, thus preserving all three years on his rookie contract.  Done
• Comma after He made his debut in Game 1 of the series  Done
• Don't need the line about 2017 Worlds here, that'll be covered in the int'l play section  Done
• Add kg conversion for 10 pounds of muscle  Done
• Can cut second sentence of second paragraph and just say that USA Today named him a rookie to watch.  Done
• scored the teams' → scored the team's  Done
• continued to struggle to score goals and assists → continued his scoring struggles  Done
• Cut last sentence of second paragraph, Chuck's firing doesn't affect JEE  Done
• "their momentum was stagnated"  Done
• This isn't necessary to put in the article, but the Greenway - Eriksson Ek - Kunin line was called the GEEK Squad
  • The double E just gives you so much to work with! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 22:34, 16 February 2024 (UTC)
• Cut the line about Fenton being replaced by Guerin for the same reason as above (not directly relevant)  Done
• Comma after lost veteran centerman Mikko Koivu and Eric Staal  Done
• Cut line about the 2020-21 season format  Done
• Although he injured his knee in Game 6, Eriksson Ek returned to finish the game but remained injured. Confusing wording  Done
• "Eriksson Ek remained the Wild's top-line center going into the 2021-22 season but swapped"  Done
• second-fastest goals to start a game How fast were they?  Done
  • Added to article. Gotta love oddly specific stats. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 22:34, 16 February 2024 (UTC)

International play

• Move medal table to this section per MOS  Done
• "his home country of Sweden"  Done
• He first represented Sweden at → He first played with the Sweden under-18 team both for flow and to make the WL make more sense  Done
• "although the team failed to medal both times."  Done
• Would be helpful to have his goal and point tallies from all tournaments, not just 2017 Worlds  Done

Player profile

• Described as an aggressive offensive threat By whom?  Done
• "Eriksson Ek says he models his game after"  Done
• "assistant general manager" doesn't need to be capitalized  Done
• his ability to be a two-way player → his skill as a two-way player  Done
• Swap the general description from Stubb for the direct quote of "great speed, a good strong shot and excellent puck-handling"  Done

Career statistics

• Make sure this section is sourced
  • At the very bottom of the article, it says Biographical information and career statistics from and then lists a bunch of sources. Is this alright? It is pretty standard on other articles. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 18:41, 19 February 2024 (UTC)
    • I've been told the statistics tables need specific citations under them. (Shrug). Something to bring up with the WikiProject. — GhostRiver 19:30, 19 February 2024 (UTC)

References

• "url-access=subscription" should be noted in any reference from The Athletic  Done
• Presumably articles put out by the Swedish Hockey League are written in Swedish, not in Finnish?  Done
• The following publications should be italicized (i.e. marked as "work" and not "publisher"): The Athletic, Star Tribune, USA Today, Sports Illustrated, Twin Cities Pioneer Press, The Hockey News  Done
• [64] uses NHL.com as the work instead of National Hockey League as the publisher  Done
• Typo in [69], an additional "M" at the end of "Twin Cities Pioneer Press"  Done
• Per MOS:ALLCAPS, references in all caps should be reduced to title case  Done

Other comments

• No stability concerns, nominator is primary editor
• One photo is properly licensed. Would recommend cropping so that just Joel is in the photo  Done
• Earwig copyvio score looks good, a pass reveals it's all proper nouns and direct quotes

HickoryOughtShirt?4 Apologies for the delay, I have been dealing with personal and medical issues. Earwig is down as of my writing this, so I'll let you address the prose comments before I do a CV sweep. Putting on hold. — GhostRiver 20:05, 16 February 2024 (UTC)

• No worries GhostRiver, health always comes first. Fun fact: I looked at other GA hockey articles for inspiration on the lead and began copying JVR's article when I realized it seemed familiar...two years fly by! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 18:49, 19 February 2024 (UTC)

Made a couple extra tweaks. I'd go to the WikiProject to get clarity on whether career statistics sections should be cited so we can get consensus. Passing now. — GhostRiver 19:30, 19 February 2024 (UTC)