Talk:Joel Farabee/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by HickoryOughtShirt?4 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 19:42, 7 January 2021 (UTC)Reply


Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 19:42, 7 January 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • I just finished watching the game today, and he just scored a goal. That means the stats need updating.
  • The lead could use more of his college career and his career with the Flyers so far.  Done
  • Does Dave have any profession?   Done
    • Business owner
  • Link Ottawa in the lead.  Done
  • Change "NCAA Division 1" to NCAA Division I.  Done
  • Link University of New Hampshire.  Done
  • "6-1, 160 pounds" Conversions needed.
  • "first-round" Don't think the hyphen is needed.  Done
  • Ref 28 doesn't explicitly say Farabee was on the team.  Done
  • On the awards table, the third column's first cell needs some type of label.  Done
  • If you can, ref 20 should be replaced with a better source.  Done

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 05:31, 14 January 2021 (UTC)Reply

Nova Crystallis, thanks for the review (didn't realize you're a Philly fan). I will work on these changes ASAP and add something about the 2021 season. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 01:21, 16 January 2021 (UTC)Reply