Talk:John Allen (RAF officer)/GA1
Latest comment: 8 months ago by Pickersgill-Cunliffe in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk · contribs) 22:57, 26 December 2023 (UTC)
Prelim
edit- Article is stable
- Images correctly licensed
- No duplicated links
- Earwig reports copyvio unlikely
Lede and infobox
edit- Link Second World War
- Linked in both places, you may have overlooked the one in the lead. Zawed (talk) 03:42, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
- Link sortie
- Done. Zawed (talk) 03:42, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
- Infobox says he was born on 2 July
- Oops, that was a typo. Zawed (talk) 03:42, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
Early life
edit- Is Laurance a spelling error?
- I did a doublecheck on this when writing the article because, like you, I thought it was a typo but all sources I have with his middle name spell it that way. Zawed (talk) 03:44, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
Second World War
edit- Link Second World War
- Done. Zawed (talk) 03:54, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
- "From mid-May" give the year
- Done. Zawed (talk) 03:54, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
- Give Deere his rank
- Done. Zawed (talk) 03:54, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
- "Messerschmitt Bf 109s fighters" sp
- Fixed. Zawed (talk) 03:54, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
- "the destruction of which was observed"
- Done. Zawed (talk) 03:54, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
- Link bail out
- Done. Zawed (talk) 03:54, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
- Link scrambled
- Done. Zawed (talk) 03:54, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
- "Allen is buried"
- Done. Zawed (talk) 03:54, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
References
edit- References look good.
@Zawed: Hi, that's all I have for now. Will await your responses. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 22:57, 26 December 2023 (UTC)
- @Pickersgill-Cunliffe: thanks for the review, much appreciated. I have responded as above. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 03:57, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
- @Zawed: Passing this article as satisfying the GA criteria. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 00:14, 28 December 2023 (UTC)