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Can't use this properly on this Android phone, but does anyone have the reference for Frost's time with Westland? Designing the Whirlwind fuselage is a big thing, and not mentioned in any other record I have seen (and I have been researching the Whirlwind design for five years). — Preceding unsigned comment added by 149.254.234.213 (talk) 07:57, 2 November 2016 (UTC)
Digressions in text
editThe digression on UFOs seems unnecessarily large. While some is appropiate to ilustrate the cultural background for the Avrocar that which is included seems excessive to me. GraemeLeggett 12:55, 25 September 2006 (UTC)
- Agreed. The first two paras are on-topic, but the rest really doesn't have to do with anything in the article -- much of it postdates it. Maury (talk) 19:03, 6 January 2008 (UTC)
- More than just a superficial revision is needed. This was an early attempt at writing a Wikipedia article and needs an extensive rewrite. FWiW Bzuk (talk) 03:38, 18 May 2009 (UTC).
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Early life
editNobody graduates with honours in anything from a British school, and they didn't back then. (I'm using school in the British sense, i.e. to describe pre-university education.) Could someone clarify what was intended here? Notreallydavid (talk) 16:55, 30 October 2016 (UTC)