Talk:John James Hattstaedt

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Parkwells in topic Edit for standard headers/content

Edit for standard headers/content

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This is a strange article, way over-cited in the Lead, but with little content about his life and activities of the Conservatory. Remove over-bolding of parents' and descendants' names. There is too much information about grandchildren and great-grandchildren and marriages. Edit to create standard organization and format for bio article. All those sources should have more information about his adult life, including the name of his wife. He did not have children on his own.Parkwells (talk) 17:44, 23 February 2019 (UTC)Reply