Talk:John Paciorek/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Eurodyne (talk · contribs) 05:07, 16 February 2015 (UTC)

I'll get this started some time next week. Eurodyne (talk) 05:07, 16 February 2015 (UTC)

Just like Mario Hollands, is there an image you could possibly add? Eurodyne (talk) 05:38, 16 February 2015 (UTC)

Unfortunately no. There's only a handful of pictures at all of him during his playing career, and it would take quite a bit of digging to determine if there's a chance they've fallen into the public domain (presuming they're 1963 or earlier, otherwise no chance of that). Wizardman 02:28, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

• In the introduction, "is an American former baseball player." it seems like there should be a comma after 'American'. Eurodyne (talk) 07:17, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

  Nope, that's the correct way. I used to have it written as "former American baseball player" since it sounds a big cleaner, but people thought that meant "former American" so i write it the other way now. Wizardman 17:08, 22 February 2015 (UTC)

• Would it be possible to get the red linked pages created? Eurodyne (talk) 07:01, 26 February 2015 (UTC)

  Should be able to; can do that over the next couple days. Wizardman 04:09, 1 March 2015 (UTC)

Any issues aside from that one above? (Haven't gotten to it yet, been away from here. Not a GA criteria issue, though I will create them at some point). Wizardman 23:17, 13 March 2015 (UTC)

I'm going to place this back in the queue since I haven't heard from the reviewer all month. Wizardman 02:51, 29 March 2015 (UTC)

Sorry was super inactive. Go ahead and place it back, unless you want me to finish it now... Eurodyne (talk) 02:30, 1 April 2015 (UTC)

No problem, if you want to finish it that's fine, just let me know. Wizardman 02:37, 1 April 2015 (UTC)

Just getting back to normal activity now. I'll hopefully finish this at the end of the week or so. Eurodyne (talk) 02:38, 1 April 2015 (UTC)