Talk:John Robert Boyle

GA Review

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Reviewer: Nikkimaria (talk) 13:09, 30 September 2010 (UTC)

Hello! I'll be reviewing this article for potential GA status. My review should be posted shortly. Cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 13:09, 30 September 2010 (UTC)

Looks good, passing as GA. Nikkimaria (talk) 13:47, 30 September 2010 (UTC)

Writing and formatting

• "taught school" - either be more specific as to which school or what type of school, or take out "school"
• "with whom he had either two[1] or three[2] children" - infobox says two
• Spell out numbers under 10
• What's a trunk line?
• Is the title Education Minister or Minister of Education?
• "which, contesting their first election" - check agreement
• Check hyphen use - see WP:HYPHEN

Accuracy and verifiability

• "he died February 15, 1936, on his way to Jamaica" - source for infobox saying he died in Ottawa?
• Journals in works cited should include page range for article
• Need accent on Mahé

Broad

No issues noted

Neutrality

• Some minor phrasing problems - be sure to maintain an encyclopedic tone at all times

Stability

No issues noted

Images

No issues noted

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