Tagged for cleanup

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I tagged this article for cleanup because of its pervasive errors of grammar, style, and punctuation, especially in the introductory paragraph.

I've now cleaned up the areas in question and removed the tag. It's no featured article but imo it doesn't require cleanup anymore. --Soulchild


I think another shot at cleanup needs to be taken here, especially the very last section. The grammar is so bad it's nearly incomprehensible. --mmoskwa