Talk:Joint Action Committee for Political Affairs

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Am unsure why this would meet blatant advertising criteria. This article is about an existing organization, similar to other groups with pages including Religious Action Committee, National Jewish Democratic Society, and AIPAC. Care was taken to make this unbiased and factual with references and linkable footnotes to corroborate the information. This was the first Pro-Israel PAC formed, which helped pave the way for many of the organizations that exist today, which provides historical significance. If there are things that you would recommend to fix the page, please share as I would like to have this page remain. Thank you.

It's a matter of tone and content. You may not have intended it to be promotional but it certainly reads like it to me -- like a PR person took chunks from the website (I checked for copyvios but didn't spot any). Oh and WP:OSE is relevant. – ukexpat (talk) 00:59, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

fixable, though. needs rewriting for that & to avoid sounding like praise of the group. DGG (talk) 04:25, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

DGG,

I have updated the article and think it is less promotional. Would appreciate any feedback or recommendations. Thank you, MMWilgus 8/11/09 Mmwilgus (talk) 14:56, 12 August 2009 (UTC) —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mmwilgus (talk • contribs) 18:56, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

seems roughly OK, additional references would help, preferably from as wide a range of sources politically as possible. "care about domestic concerns" is a little troublesome, because they care about them from a socially liberal not conservative point of view. DGG ( talk ) 00:27, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

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