Talk:Jon Cryer/GA2

GA Review

I will review this article against the criteria. Robert Skyhawk (Talk) 22:57, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

First Review by Robert Skyhawk

I have read this article over, and I am sorry to say that I do not believe it satisfies the Good Article criteria. My biggest concern is the writing of the article; there are numerous gramatical errors and typos, and unprofessional language is used on several occasions (i.e. "got to", "then again", etc.). Also, there are several pieces of uncited information which should be cited. This article needs some work to become a Good article, but I believe this is definitely within reach. Once these issues are resolved, please feel free to renominate it. Robert Skyhawk (Talk) 23:19, 21 August 2008 (UTC)