Talk:Joseph Clover (artist)
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Amitchell125 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:03, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- Avoid single-sentence paragraphs in the lead, probably needs to only be two paras anyway.
- "his fiancé" shouldn't that be "his fiancée"?
- "the Swedenborgian New Church" I would put "New Church" into the pipe.
- "and Aylsham, the small Norfolk town of Aylsham where" not getting this?
- "a farmer.[5][3] " ref order.
- "the 12 children" twelve.
- "working life in Norwich, from" overlinked.
- "Swedenborgian New Church" link this again first time outside the lead.
- "painted his uncle.[20][15]" ref order.
- "c.1803" space.
- "until 1807.[15] In 1806" repetitive.
- "exceptional".[15][11] " ref order.
- Could link List of mayors of Norwich for lead/body.
- "1796-1832" etc in gallery captions should be en-dash.
- "c.1813" space.
- "Northumberland - August" en-dash.
- "Arms public House" why capital H?
- Year ranges in refs need to be en-dash not hyphens.
- ISBNs should be consistent format.
- "Society 1810-2010. London" en-dash.
- Any watercolourist categories?
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:45, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: All the above have ben addressed. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 08:07, 5 September 2021 (UTC)