 | Joseph Ellison has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: January 24, 2022. (Reviewed version). |
| This article is rated GA-class on Wikipedia's content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
| ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
.jpg)
.svg)
GA Review
edit| GA toolbox |
|---|
| Reviewing |
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Joseph Ellison/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Djmaschek (talk · contribs) 05:16, 23 January 2022 (UTC)
Initial comment
editI plan to review this for GA class. It's late now, so I will get to it later. I will comment about one thing. See below. Djmaschek (talk) 05:16, 23 January 2022 (UTC)
- American Revolutionary War, paragraph 1: "It was decided however that he should stay with the barge in case the army needed to retreat back to the coast." The word "coast" is wrong here. Charleston and Bunker Hill were across the harbor from Boston. If the army retreated, it would have retreated across the harbor to Boston. See the maps at the Battle of Bunker Hill article.
Done removed "to the coast".
Review 1
editThe article passes GA review (with flying colors). Usually, I find typos and other minor issues, but this time I don't see any. Djmaschek (talk) 04:25, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
- Well-written: ✓ Pass
- Verifiable: ✓ Pass
- Broad in its coverage: ✓ Pass
- Neutral: ✓ Pass
- Stable: ✓ Pass
- Illustrated: ✓ Pass