Talk:Joseph R. Fisher (author)/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Eddie891 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Eddie891 (talk · contribs) 18:44, 24 December 2017 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
::Per WP:LEDE, an article of this length should have a lead section that is 2-3 paragraphs.
- I find that, as WP:CITEKILL illustrates, having constant citations[1] will [2] make[3] the [4] article [5] less [1][2][6][7] readable
- For those of us who don't know anything about the Irish Boundary Commission, some background is definitely needed
- There is no mention what he did from 1918 to 1924.
- "This was seen as a grave embarrassment in Dublin." is unsourced
- I'd try to avoid one and two sentence paragraphs
- " Ultimately the agreement to make no changes was concluded by the three governments and the Commission rubber-stamped it. The publication, or not, of the Commission's report became a legal irrelevance but remained controversial ever after." is unsourced
- "Fisher being a Unionist newspaperman, the Irish government seems to have suspected Fisher of being the source." Seems? either it did or it didn't
- "close to the Swiss Cottage Tube station." unsourced
- "Finland and the Tsars" (1899). London: Edward Arnold.
- "The End of the Irish Parliament" (1911). London: Edward Arnold.
- “Finland” in The Encyclopædia Britannica (11th ed.), 1911 (in part; with Peter Alexeivitch Kropotkin and John Scott Keltie)" ::Unsourced
- Overall, more sourcing and context necessary.
- I'd recommend dividing the Irish Boundary Commission section into smaller sections for readability.
- Do we know the day of his birth?
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- I'm slightly concerned about the reliability of some of the sources including the first one. Convince me otherwise.
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- +is there no image of him available?
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail: