Talk:Joseph S. Bartley

Latest comment: 9 months ago by AirshipJungleman29 in topic Did you know nomination

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 18:04, 1 February 2024 (UTC)Reply

Created by DragonflySixtyseven (talk). Self-nominated at 23:41, 7 January 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Joseph S. Bartley; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.Reply

  •   Article was new enough and long enough at the time of the nomination, is adequately sourced, and is free of close paraphrasing. QPQ has been done. The hook is interesting, accepting the quote given above for verification. Only one minor issue: his death is mentioned in the lede but not in the article body; I'd like to see at least some information about his post-release life and death in the body. The nomination will be approved once that is addressed. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 11:09, 17 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Narutolovehinata5: - Information about Bartley's life post-release is sparse but not non-existent; I've added it to the article (as well as some other details I found elsewhere). DS (talk) 18:10, 19 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
Oh, and I also found a photo of Bartley, which can be used on the front page. DS (talk) 18:15, 19 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
Should be good to go once the actual death is mentioned in the body. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:20, 23 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Narutolovehinata5: - done. DS (talk) 14:15, 23 January 2024 (UTC)Reply