Talk:Juliet Davenport

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Wire723 in topic Mark Shorrock's epithets

Mark Shorrock's epithets

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"(Low Carbon Solar, Shire oak, Inazin, Tidal Lagoon Swansea Bay)" - these words don't mean anything as they stand:

  • "Low Carbon Solar" sounds like an adjectival phrase. Is Mark Shorrock himself "low carbon solar"? Presumably not. If the intention is to refer to some project in which Mr Shorrock has been involved, then that needs to be explained and properly referenced.
  • "Shire oak" - no idea what that means; again, if the reference is to some business or other project, then that needs to be explained and properly referenced.
  • "Inazin" - ditto.
  • "Tidal Lagoon Swansea Bay" - ditto.

I'm afraid I don't think it is helpful to the average Wikipedia user simply to place buzz-words in brackets by an individual's name. One could say something like: "...who has himself been involved in a number of significant environmental energy projects, including [ ], [ ] and [ ]", so long as one can cite appropriate published references.45ossington (talk) 08:46, 23 October 2013 (UTC)Reply

Those words were removed sometime in 2013. --Wire723 (talk) 11:28, 18 November 2021 (UTC)Reply