Talk:Juliet Nightingale/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 19:26, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 19:26, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

• Infobox looks good.
  • Thank you! – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:44, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
• "also Quinn" → "also known as Quinn" or something similar
  • Since Quinn was only her surname, using "also" is typically the common practice for every soap character that I've seen? – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:44, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
• Try reducing the amounts of quotes in #Casting_and_characterisation.
  •  Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:44, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
• The storylines section looks good as well.
  • Thank you! – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:44, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
• Don't forget to recite sources at the end of each quote per WP:REF.
  •  Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 01:48, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
• Couldn't find any issues with #Relationships.
• The reception section could probably be expanded with some reviews from critics.
• Archive all sources (either manually or with this tool).
  •  Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:44, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
• Optional, but linking sources in the "|website=" parameter helps readers.
  • I'm slightly confused, this referring to the Female First source? It's the only source a link, so I assume so; it does not have a Wikipedia entry. – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 01:48, 23 March 2021 (UTC)

I was just referring to references in general. At second glance I now see they were already linked. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 01:56, 23 March 2021 (UTC)

• Some references from Digital Spy are missing authors.

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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