Talk:June Buchanan

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Rhizomesandranch in topic Edits to "Early Life" and "Career" sections
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Edits to "Early Life" and "Career" sections

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Hi fellow editors,

I'm working to improve this article and I wanted more opinions on some of the changes I was thinking about making.

•Should I limit the number of in text citations in the Early Life section? I noticed the article currently says things like "According to an Associated Press article..." and "The Social Security Death Index..." but these things are not linked in the references section. Should I remove these leading phrases and include hyperlinks to the articles?

•Should I increase the information included about Alice Lloyd College in the career section? The vast majority of her life was spent aiding this mission, so it feels incomplete to not include a bit more about the organization.

In addition to these questions, I plan on editing some more for clarity and ease of reading, which will be noted in my description of changes in the history.

Thanks for the help!

Es0116 (talk) 15:56, 29 March 2023 (UTC)Reply

If you haven't made these edits yet, I think I would just ensure that any sources that are referenced are linked clearly somewhere; and I'd definitely add info that you think might be missing. Rhizomesandranch (talk) 15:20, 31 March 2023 (UTC)Reply