Talk:Juni Taisen: Zodiac War
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Ozflashman in topic Characters
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Characters
editCharacter summaries should be limited to descriptions and not as a repository for further "in-universe" or plot information. See Style Manual Ozflashman (talk) 09:46, 8 November 2017 (UTC)
- Edited the Characters section to standardize the content, improve syntax, remove verbosity and "in-universe" information. Ozflashman (talk) 02:59, 15 November 2017 (UTC)
- I propose to remove the statements as to the order in which the warriors are killed from this section as I believe this constitutes "in-universe" or plot information, rather than character descriptions. Happy to discuss. Ozflashman (talk) 22:24, 12 December 2017 (UTC)
- Agree. Going a step further, I'm not sure religiously adding details of how people die every week is necessary or appropriate either. Information that helps describe the character or their overall role in the plot is useful. Detailing that Ox is "killed after a surprise attack by Rabbit leaves him trapped under Monkey's reanimated corpse, allowing Nezumi [who?] to use one of Sheep's explosives to kill him and Rabbit" doesn't say anything about Ox. Leave that to a Plot Summary section if one is needed (it isn't). Kajitani-Eizan (talk) 18:54, 13 December 2017 (UTC)
- I modified that Character statements as proposed, also changed the tense from the past into the present. I also modified/left references to alliances as they establish relationships between characters, but removed statements as to what happened to them as these events are covered in the episode summaries Ozflashman (talk) 22:53, 18 December 2017 (UTC)