Talk:Justiniano Borgoño/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Kimikel (talk · contribs) 00:24, 6 August 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Rollinginhisgrave (talk · contribs) 02:40, 11 November 2024 (UTC)

I'll review this for GARC Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 02:40, 11 November 2024 (UTC)

Finished up. Thanks for an enjoyable read, you write very well, and I perhaps felt obligated to nitpick. Feel free to flag disagreement. Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 11:48, 12 November 2024 (UTC)

Prose and content

• I can see Army is capitalized in Peruvian Army. Is this reflective of RS' use?
• leading to Cáceres' reelection in August of that year mention whether this was Borgoño's intention as it's a bit confusing if he won or lost the election
• Mention in the lede what year he was president to contextualize when it occurred between the War of the Pacific and his retirement.
• Why do you use such a long name for his father? According to the Spanish article it's not how he was commonly referred to.
• established government, and against the forces I think , and should be removed
• continued to administrate → administrated
• sustained an injury to his right leg euphemistic
• following his release from captivity
• During that year, he was
• WP:CINS
  • , and became the President of Peru in April 1894
  • , and then transferred to the Morro Solar in Chorrillos.
  • ... so on
• combated → fought
• the disarmament of → disarming
• Could you clarify if he held elected position before Cáceres became President?
• What is article 91?
• 10 August 1894, succeeding Borgoño ? What do you think
• What is violent intervention?
• Borgoño decided to leave[left] Peru and relocate[d]
• by thieves haha
• Is there anything you can cut from the infobox?

Suggestions

• capturing → capture
• which he continued to administrate until the outbreak of the War of the Pacific. → continued to administrate for twenty years (avoids repetition of outbreak of the War of the Pacific in following sentence.
• attended to consider → treated, as it is a bit euphemistic
• Ancon, Lima MOS:GEOLINK

Sources

• [4] Y
• [8] Y Do you think he would pass GNG?
• [11] Y
• [15] clock The elections called by Borgoño offered Cáceres as its only candidate This reads as the ballot being controlled rather than opponents abstaining
• [19] Can you quote this for me?
• [23] As with this one, not loading on my device for some reason.

Other

• Images clock would the bust be under copyright in Spain? Would a picture simply of the bust be able to fall under copyright?
• Broad / summary style Y
• Neutral Y
• Stable Y
• COPYVIO / No OR Y 1% earwig, nothing found in spot check so far

Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 11:20, 12 November 2024 (UTC)