Talk:Kära syster/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 11:12, 26 January 2022 (UTC)

Many thanks, as always. Chiswick Chap (talk) 11:26, 26 January 2022 (UTC)

• Why is Dear Sister italicized in the infobox?
  • Removed.
• "that timbre" → Why the italicization? Timbre is a fairly common musical word.
  • Removed. I think it was italicised in the original, but no matter.
• The Stadsgården photo could be removed, it's sandwiching text with the poster image and adds little value, imo.
  • It's the only image of the scene of the epistle, and there is no sandwiching, the paragraphs work fine at all widths from really narrow to full-screen, as the images are not at the same place in the text.
• "die. :||:" → Is the stuff at the end intended?
  • Yes, it means repeat the line. We could literally repeat the line, I guess.
• Nice work on this, all the other comments I would usually make seem to have preemptively been addressed.
  • Thanks, yes, I guessed what might have been coming! Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:00, 27 January 2022 (UTC)