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This article gives little technical information about the product (e.g. what it is or they are) and insteads talks a lot about product history, extolling virtues of its alliance with Dress for Success and talking about it being the "must-have" item for fashion editors and other fashion-conscious people. More should be devoted to chemical composition, reception upon roll-out and what exactly the product is. I need to know for research purposes and got nothing I needed from this article.

Last edited at 05:24, 3 October 2007 (UTC). Substituted at 21:28, 29 April 2016 (UTC)

Desperately needs WP_RELIABLE documentation

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I've tried to dehype and tighten somewhat. Really should be sent to AFD, but it is a widely-used product so left it in for reference. Bellagio99 (talk) 18:31, 16 April 2019 (UTC)Reply