Talk:K-232 (Kansas highway)

Latest comment: 11 years ago by TCN7JM in topic GA Review
Good articleK-232 (Kansas highway) has been listed as one of the Engineering and technology good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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August 9, 2013Good article nomineeListed
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GA Review

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Reviewer: TCN7JM (talk · contribs) 00:11, 7 August 2013 (UTC)Reply

I will review this article immediately. TCN7JM 00:11, 7 August 2013 (UTC)Reply

I have the following concerns:

  1. You should modify the conversion template to read "17.263-mile-long" by having it read {{convert|17.263|mi|km|adj=mid|-long}}.
      Done Ks0stm (TCGE) 16:46, 7 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
  2. Try to cut down starting so many sentences in the lead with "K-232".
      Done Ks0stm (TCGE) 16:46, 7 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
  3. Regarding the first sentence in the history, I don't think it's referred to that often as "Route K-232".
      Done Sorry about that...that was someone else's doing while it was on the main page. Ks0stm (TCGE) 16:46, 7 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
  4. Is it possible to reword the first sentence so that it reads "between Interstate 70 and what was then U.S. Route 40" or something? I think this would be better for flow, despite the current name of the road being "Old U.S. 40".
    I'd rather not, but if you insist I will. Ks0stm (TCGE) 17:33, 7 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
    It's okay as-is, I guess. TCN7JM 11:41, 8 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
  5. Was the route paved when it was designated? If not, when?
    I can't find this information, but knowing Kansas it's highly likely that it was. I just don't think there will be any sources out there to say. Ks0stm (TCGE) 17:33, 7 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
    Looking at the first map that had K-232 on it is usually enough. I tried to check the map myself, but my browser won't open the file for some reason. TCN7JM 11:41, 8 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
      Done Ks0stm (TCGE) 12:21, 9 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
  6. "K-18/K-232 highway" doesn't sound common either.
    Discussed this on IRC. Ks0stm (TCGE) 12:21, 9 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
  7. You start both paragraphs of the route description with "K-232" and that does look overused within those paragraphs. You should try to switch up the nouns a bit.
      Done Ks0stm (TCGE) 12:21, 9 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
  8. You should use {{convert/spell}} for the single-digit mileages near the end of the second paragraph.
      Done Ks0stm (TCGE) 12:21, 9 August 2013 (UTC)Reply

I will put this article on hold to fix these concerns. TCN7JM 00:49, 7 August 2013 (UTC)Reply

Alright, all of my concerns seem to have been addressed. I will pass this article. Good job. TCN7JM 12:29, 9 August 2013 (UTC)Reply