Talk:K-42 (Kansas highway)/GA1
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 18:13, 25 June 2022 (UTC)
- Can you explain how you get the length from those various pages of the PDF you link to in ref 2?
- Not sure that is necessary. An example is New York State Route 22 and New York State Route 28, which are both FA articles. -420Traveler (talk) 12:40, 26 August 2022 (UTC)
- " K-42's western" Its terminus.
- Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 19:06, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
- "Along the way it intersects" -> "Along the way K-42 intersects"
- Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 19:06, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
- "to just west" just?
- The word "just" is used because the road turns 'just' before it reaches Clearwater. ― TUNA × 17:43, 18 August 2022 (UTC)
- I agree with Tunakanski, but changed wording. -420Traveler (talk) 19:06, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
- The word "just" is used because the road turns 'just' before it reaches Clearwater. ― TUNA × 17:43, 18 August 2022 (UTC)
- Weird to see traffic stats before describing the history and path of the route.
- That's how all of these articles are formatted. ― TUNA × 19:04, 19 August 2022 (UTC)
- "::I agree with Tunakanski, they are mostly formatted like this. -420Traveler (talk) 19:06, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
- "connects to, to National Highway System at" eh?
- Fixed ― TUNA × 17:43, 18 August 2022 (UTC)
- "Sand Creek. Past the creek it proceeds" -> "Sand Creek after which it proceeds"
- Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 19:29, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
- "Kansas and Oklahoma Railway" our article calls it "Railroad" not "Railway".
- Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 19:29, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
- "Red Creek. K-42 soon has" merge and avoid "soon".
- Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 19:29, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
- Do you really think these "creeks" will ever be notable?
- do you mean I should I remove links? -420Traveler (talk) 19:29, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
- Well unless you truly believe the creeks will ever rise to meet WP:N, yes. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 10:54, 24 August 2022 (UTC)
- Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 12:31, 26 August 2022 (UTC)
- Well unless you truly believe the creeks will ever rise to meet WP:N, yes. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 10:54, 24 August 2022 (UTC)
- do you mean I should I remove links? -420Traveler (talk) 19:29, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
- "Department is holding" was.
- Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 19:29, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
- "state can't afford" could not.
- Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 19:29, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
- "the State Highway Commission asked for" put (SHC) here.
- Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 19:29, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
- "was almost completed" just "complete" is fine.
- Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 19:29, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
- "R.C. Keeling" -> "R. C. Keeling".
- "equivalent to $105,186 in 2020 dollars" don't need the subsequent "dollars" ($ shows that) and probably to the nearest $1000 is fine.
- Fixed, the $105,186 figure is from a template that I guess is an inflation calculator so you can't change it. ― TUNA × 19:04, 19 August 2022 (UTC)
- There are clear instructions at {{Format price}} which describe how to reduce the "accuracy". The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 10:54, 24 August 2022 (UTC)
- Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 12:31, 26 August 2022 (UTC)
- Fixed, the $105,186 figure is from a template that I guess is an inflation calculator so you can't change it. ― TUNA × 19:04, 19 August 2022 (UTC)
- You link US-54 and US-400 in the prose but not the lead?
- Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 12:31, 26 August 2022 (UTC)
- "former US 81 Byp" spell it out.
- Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 12:31, 26 August 2022 (UTC)
That's it. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:39, 25 June 2022 (UTC)
- 420Traveler ping. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:52, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
- 420Traveler final ping. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:57, 11 July 2022 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: hey sorry I've been busy working recently. I will get to it this week. -420Traveler (talk) 20:06, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
- The Rambling Man I'll start working on this later when I have time since it seems 420Traveler has gone AWOL. ― TUNA × 14:10, 18 August 2022 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: I fixed most things and have a few questions. Sorry for long delay -420Traveler (talk) 19:29, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
- Replied to a couple inline. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 10:54, 24 August 2022 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: I fixed most things and have a few questions. Sorry for long delay -420Traveler (talk) 19:29, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
- The Rambling Man I'll start working on this later when I have time since it seems 420Traveler has gone AWOL. ― TUNA × 14:10, 18 August 2022 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: hey sorry I've been busy working recently. I will get to it this week. -420Traveler (talk) 20:06, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
- 420Traveler final ping. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:57, 11 July 2022 (UTC)
- 420Traveler ping. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:52, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
@The Rambling Man: Should all be fixed now, let me know. -420Traveler (talk) 12:40, 26 August 2022 (UTC)
- Ok cool, we're done here, promoting after I tweaked all the overlinking. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 22:02, 27 August 2022 (UTC)