Talk:KELO-TV/GA1
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Vaticidalprophet in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Vaticidalprophet (talk · contribs) 13:26, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
Just a few notes here:
KELO-TV and its satellites perfectly matched the flow of goods through South Dakota, which centered on Sioux Falls
-- clarity? From the second half of the sentence I'm reading this as something like "it was a popular station because Sioux Falls was a manufacturing hub", but I can't see how that follows.- More like it was a match to the needs of advertisers.
- Might be worth contextualizing in "Young Broadcasting ownership" how common/uncommon digital TV access was at the time.
- Good thought.
UTV is not broadcast in Rapid City, where Rapid-owned KKRA-LP was the MyNetworkTV affiliate
-- tense of this sentence is confused- Reworded.
- Has anything more come out about the MG/Nexstar ownership in the past 6-10 years?
- Not...really.
The news programs grew more sophisticated and professionalized
-- do we have a timeline for this?- Reworded to be less puffy.
- It's worth (dup)linking KSFY and KDLT in the newscasts section, given it's disproportionately likely readers interested in that section will want to compare their coverage.
- Done
- Can we give a timeframe on the switch from SD to HD?
- Done (HD transition of news tends to take up way too much of news sections in articles like this)
- It might be more natural/less choppy to describe the history of the station's programs (introducing morning programs, afternoon programs, etc) in a dedicated paragraph rather than across separate sparse lines.
- Done. Now with another ref which will help.
KELO-TV additionally rebroadcasts
-- no need for 'additionally'- Done
Vaticidalprophet 13:26, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
@Vaticidalprophet: Responded. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 18:20, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
- All good. I was wondering if actual statistics existed on how many people had digital-compatible devices at that point, but a Google Scholar search was only semi-helpful. Happy to pass this. Vaticidalprophet 18:21, 4 August 2023 (UTC)