Talk:KWES-TV/GA1
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Nominator: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 04:47, 29 February 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Premeditated Chaos (talk · contribs) 17:38, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Dibsing another. ♠PMC♠ (talk) 17:38, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Pretty minimal griping, really.
- "The death of John B. Walton in 1967 came after his son, John B. Walton, Jr., had taken over the family's broadcasting properties." This sentence feels twisted up into itself. Since Sr's death didn't have anything to do with Jr's takeover, it might make more sense to split this. Do we know when Jr took over?
- "In December 1969, citing economic issues with making the KMOM–KWAB business a viable one," citing economic issues and an unviable business feels slightly redundant
- Suggest linking Black-owned business
- What on earth is a Petroplex
- Believe it or not, Petroplex redirects to Midland–Odessa. Think "Metroplex" (like Dallas–Fort Worth), but with "petro"leum. The economy of this area of Texas is oil, oil, and more oil. It is not the most common regional moniker (that would be Permian Basin), but it does exist in the names of some regional companies and institutions. I actually do not see it attested in any page of the Odessa American until 1975. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 18:45, 3 July 2024 (UTC)
That's it. All minor gripes, nothing to prevent a pass. Consider these notes for improvement. No concerns with any other GA criteria - sources are reliable, spot checks checked out, no CV issues, logo is sole image and is used correctly. ♠PMC♠ (talk) 15:49, 3 July 2024 (UTC)